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Chapter 13 Summary/Outline

March 12th, 2016, 3:30 pm

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Reply the being, March 12th, 2016, 3:37 pm

Epilogue: Barlo and Paulis(Floatzel) return to Ivy and help rebuild the island.
Norg finally returns to his home and gets to see his sister again, who has become the assistant to their elder.
Thessa either returns to the village she had worked in previously, or if Malveric is alive he, Thessa, and Eix restructure the Red Tower to no longer be a military-base and the Trygon’s bad ways are defunct.
Eix is the new head of the Red Tower facility and works on ways to improve Pokémon Livlihood without experimenting on them.
Eix visits Barlo at the island and Ivy remembers him.

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I apologize for the anticlimactic end.

Just really wanted to move on at this point. :(
I don't like writing. I know this may be difficult to follow.
All I can do is describe what happens. Not so much what is said, or what is felt or visually describe much with words.

Thank you all so much for following this comic. I'm sad to have not finished it, but it's for the best for me.

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Reply the being, March 12th, 2016, 3:43 pm

Replies: @Nashew: Hahah, you weren't alone!

@LKWayvern: Hehehe yes x3
Yeah I liked Malveric being the Marowak best too now I think on it.
Yeah I'm sure it seems random, but its hard to make the logic come through succinctly in text- or at least, I am terrible at it to do it in that manner. Like I'd said, it's kindve convoluted.

@Axies: Yeah I imagine it is. :( I'm sorry about that.
True, its possibly most sensable to have him be a lucario.
He, at least to me, probably was 'good' on some level with oen of the possibilities listed in the 13 summary! I did like the darkrai from PMD a lot, haha.

@Shadowborne: hahah, somethin like that.

@QuirkyButterfree: Hahah yeah you got it. xD

Reply LKWayvern, March 12th, 2016, 6:38 pm

I know you really wanted to move on to new projects, and that you didn't really like, or feel like you were good at, writing, but thank you so much for doing this. It provides more of a sense of closure, and it's nice knowing what happened. So thank you.
I like the reveal with Xamad. There's a good motive and bad motive for him... I don't like it when Darkrai or Yveltal is the villain for no reason other then 'because evil is fun'. You did leave his true motives a bit ambiguous, but I liked how you provided a hope there was a bit more depth to him.
The thing with Asura being Pokemon Beta, and fighting... That felt a bit random, and out of left field.
This was a great comic while it lasted, and while it couldn't be drawn out, I'm glad we at least had an idea of how it ended...
Thank you so much.

Reply Pantherbrine, March 12th, 2016, 8:29 pm

Thank you for making the comic and then the outlines. It was a great read. I rather like the idea of Xamad. :)

Reply Miyto (Guest), March 12th, 2016, 11:05 pm

I like Xamad's first motive, it fits Xamad taking Cresselia's form in a yin-yang sort of way. One taking the role of the other and before balance is restored roles are stolen once again.
I also like Trygon's ideal in that motivation is true to the initial claim of 'The Trygon facility was made to create better Pokemon that can survive in their world.'
I also like the bitter irony that Darkrai's dream of making a world where pokemon can stand up to cruel gods becomes his own nightmare, as Xamad became the cruel god that pokemon needed to have taken down to better survive.
Xamad wasn't wrong, but he had to go because of what he did in order to save the life's upon the world.
I like bitter ironies like that.
Though I kind of hoped that Asura would gain a redemption after rampaging, like the power infused within her overwhelmed her at first and when she came to/was brought to her senses she would regret fighting.
Maybe sacrifice herself to blow up a falling moon as an over the top apology or something...

Thanks again for these last couple of written chapters, heck the choose-your-own-adventure piece of it is enjoyable, it both lets us see you creative process and choose our favorite version of your story, also closure. Closure is nice.

Reply SkunkWitch, March 14th, 2016, 2:26 pm

Thanks for the closure man! This story was unlike anything I have ever seen before and I am really happy to know how you at least wanted it to end.
Personally I like Cresselia being the bad guy :3

Reply Shadowborne, March 15th, 2016, 4:04 am

Ok ..... I think this is one ordinary conclusion for a tech based storyline

Reply Guest, March 16th, 2016, 5:08 am

Wait...if Malveric is a Marowak/Lucario/maybe Floatzel, how come his suit has wings?

Reply Blazefang (Guest), March 22nd, 2016, 2:42 pm

Aww... It's really sad to see this go, and overall, I think this was a great comic. The idea was fantastic. I hope someday I can be as good as you.

Reply QuirkyButterfree (Guest), March 29th, 2016, 9:31 am

Damn, I was hoping Asura wouldn't die.
Oh well.

Reply zellman01, October 23rd, 2016, 8:57 am

This was a good comic. Not by any means perfect (then again, who is perfect?) but still great. I hope you can make another comic, but I can understand if you don't.

Reply Guest, March 15th, 2017, 8:49 am

@the being: i really like this comic, to bad its ended, but can i use this concept to add to another comic?

Reply the being, July 8th, 2017, 3:02 pm

@Guest: Hey why not! Go ahead. Send a PM some time when or if you go through with it!

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