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Chapter 12 Summary/Outline

February 27th, 2016, 3:40 pm

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Reply the being, February 27th, 2016, 3:46 pm

Mmnh, here I contradict myself with Malveric. Sort of. he could either be a Floatzel, Marowak, or Lucario. It was a choice I never settled on 100%
but it does a lot for the plot depending on which.
Obvvvviiously I'd probably not stick with him dying and being a lucario. it just seems less imaginative or impactful. But I'll leave it to ya'll to stick with whatever 'what if' you like.
Final chapter next.

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Reply the being, February 27th, 2016, 3:51 pm

Replies: @Nashew: He could be! Turns out I didnt know either :P

@LKWayvern: Aha! Likely! And it does thicken the plot. xD
(Cuz blood is thicker than water, get it??? hahah.)

@Guest: Bahahah close! Though it woulda been interesting if that were the case.

@Shadowborne: Hahaha somewhat.

@NightYoshi: Heh, bipedal person coulda been neat, but lucario was closer to the mark. x3

@SkunkWitch: Ah gosh I'm both sorry and thankful for your reading and comment here- it means a lot!
I wanted somethign different. At the time there were so many PMD comics that were admittedly boring or didn't do much different. (And half of them just stopped updating altogether or got deleted, heh)
Thank you! Writing isnt a strong suit and theres a lot I'd change especially in the first 2 chapters, but here we are!
Thank you again!

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Reply SkunkWitch, February 27th, 2016, 5:07 pm

Your welcome being! And I agree about how most PMD comics don't change much from the game.

Also, there's a spelling error in the 3rd bullet point. neding is not ending

Reply Nashew, February 27th, 2016, 5:46 pm

The entire time before last week, I really thought Malveric was a Charizard. =|

Reply LKWayvern, February 27th, 2016, 6:55 pm

Ha. Ha! Haha! Hahahahahaha!
Heheh. Blood humor. Heh.

And here all the twists and threads begin entwining together~
All three options are really interesting. I find the first interesting because of the slowly increasing number of Lucario antagonists(*cough*Krypton*cough*). The Third one I found really confusing. The one with Malveric being Thessa's mate I actually liked the best. It would probably have developed Thessa's character quite nicely. Or maybe it would've made everyone more depressed. Who knows.
And Asura and Rymandas being Darkrai and Cresselia...
The Cresselia thing seemed a bit random, but Rymandas' reappearance, and sudden Xamad-ness both seemed really random.

Reply Axies, February 27th, 2016, 8:17 pm

I can see what you mean by the story getting a little convoluted, the Malveric part is a bit hard to follow.

Personally, while I think it's the least impactful, I think the Lucario version would be the most believable of the three. The other two seem a bit too coincidental.

Shame it turns out my prediction of Darkrai being good got ruined. Oh well, hopefully my Legend of Zelda prediction still turns out right.

Reply Shadowborne, February 27th, 2016, 9:05 pm

I think this will be based on the Butterfly Effect (Until Dawn)

Reply QuirkyButterfree Forgot Her PW (Guest), March 8th, 2016, 5:37 pm

Asura's gonna become Pokemon Beta, huh?
As the CinemaSins guys would say, ROLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL CREDITS!

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